A tsunami came at me at full speed!
But then I found out that the tsunami was 3 meters tall and I lived in the city...
But then the tsunami got bigger and came to the city!
But then an earthquake happened and pushed away all the water back into the ocean, ( by the way I know that it doesn't work like that.)
But then my granny slapped me,
But then she forgave me for stealing her CoOoOoOoOoKiEs,
But then a helicopter picked me up!
But then there was a horse in there with me and that was nice...
But then the helicopter PUSHED me out!
But then the horsey saved me and gave me his parachute.
R.I.P horsey...
Okay that's enough for one da-ay-ay-ay-ay-ay aaaah! Now I'm getting abducted by aliens.
Hope you liked this story, it id definitly not real and I know in writing you shoulden't say but then, but then, but then, but that was the whole point of this story! (:
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 29 June 2020
Friday, 26 June 2020
self-portrait
Hello, I did a self-portrait except a digital one.
It is not the best self-portrait but it's still a self portrait.
Thursday, 25 June 2020
Thursday, 18 June 2020
Blog comments
WALT: appreciate the work of others
In Room 2 we are learning to post positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Here is a comment that I write on a blog.
First you do positive, here are three sentence starters for positive:
I really liked how...
It is so cool that you...
I like this blog post because...
Second you do thoughtful, here are two sentence starters for thoughtful:
I think that the way you...
this reminds me of...
Third you do helpful, here are two sentence starters for helpful:
Maybe next time...
Next time you could...
Do you use positive, thoughtful, helpful comments?
In Room 2 we are learning to post positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Here is a comment that I write on a blog.
First you do positive, here are three sentence starters for positive:
I really liked how...
It is so cool that you...
I like this blog post because...
Second you do thoughtful, here are two sentence starters for thoughtful:
I think that the way you...
this reminds me of...
Third you do helpful, here are two sentence starters for helpful:
Maybe next time...
Next time you could...
Do you use positive, thoughtful, helpful comments?
Wednesday, 17 June 2020
Book review, Sisters
I read a book called sisters and for my hot spot I had to write a book review, it is a bit hard to read and it does not show the whole page so under neath the picture I will write what it says.
Author: Raina Telgemeier.
The book was about two sisters who fight alot and then they get a brother. It also goes back to when they were younger and it tell us what the ''incident'' is.
I liked how the book what quite relatable! The two sister are like me and my older sister.
Friday, 12 June 2020
White crayon letter
WALT: Write a persuasive letter.
Lily,
Lily,
White crayon here.
I don't know how to say this but... WHENEVER you use me… you have to use BLACK crayon too!
Why can't you see me by myself?!
Why can't you see me by myself?!
I get it, but how come whenever you use black crayon you fill him in with the other colours and not ME!
I may be a little jealous of black crayon... but that's not the point!
I may be a little jealous of black crayon... but that's not the point!
I also feel left out when all the other crayons are talking about how colourful and bright they are...
But I'm the opposite of that! I’m not even a colour… I'm a shade.
But I'm the opposite of that! I’m not even a colour… I'm a shade.
Now could you PLEASE put some dye on the tip of me so I have SOME colour?
Your annoyed... and slightly sad friend,
White crayon.
Home learning google drawing
WALT: use google draw and be creative.
for my hot spot in Room 2 I did a google drawing of home learning. This was one of the tasks.
Here is my google drawing of home learning.
Friday, 5 June 2020
Thursday, 4 June 2020
Wednesday, 3 June 2020
Mary
- Mary has brown, wavy hair
- she wears a blue and white mantle
- she has a kind and loving heart
- She is confident and brave because she listened to the angel that came from God when he said that she would have a child.
- The mother of Jesus
- She is special
- She is very faithful
- She speaks hebrew
Here is a drawing of Mary I made on google drawing.
- she wears a blue and white mantle
- she has a kind and loving heart
- She is confident and brave because she listened to the angel that came from God when he said that she would have a child.
- The mother of Jesus
- She is special
- She is very faithful
- She speaks hebrew
Here is a drawing of Mary I made on google drawing.
Tuesday, 2 June 2020
The Evil Shoemaker Description
WALT: Analyse and create a character description
Now... this Shoemaker isn't just a normal Shoemaker, he is an Evil Shoemaker who is very selfish and rude!
He does have alright ideas though, like a copy button he made, although it is not okay to steal other peoples ideas.
I know for sure that he looks a bit odd, his nose is curved and pointed like a witch and and his neck is freakishly long like a giraffe.
His chin goes very far down with his side burns following along with his chin. The Evil Shoemakers tux and top hat make him look very fancy! But inside he is a person who cares about business more than people, that is probably why he doesn't have any friends.
For the Evil Shoemaker to get his customers to come he needs his copy button and his grin which attracts customers very easily. The Evil Shoemaker has red curly hair if you look closely an if you look even closer you can see his tiny pale ears which are hard to see.
If you ever see the Evil Shoemaker then do not buy his shoes because he is a customer stealing, copier who only cares about money and shoes!
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