Friday 12 June 2020

White crayon letter

WALT: Write a persuasive letter.

 Lily,
White crayon here.
I don't know how to say this but... WHENEVER you use me… you have to use BLACK crayon too!
Why can't you see me by myself?!
I get it, but how come whenever you use black crayon you fill him in with the other colours and not ME!
I may be a little jealous of black crayon... but that's not the point!
I also feel left out when all the other crayons are talking about how colourful and bright they are...
But I'm the opposite of that! I’m not even a colour… I'm a shade. 
Now could you PLEASE put some dye on the tip of me so I have SOME colour?


Your annoyed... and slightly sad friend,

White crayon.





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1 comment:

  1. Miss Pownall16 June 2020 at 10:08

    Lovely work Lily. You have done a stunning job. I love the idea about putting dye on the tip so the crayon will actually be used. Ka pai!

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