Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 4 June 2020
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hello Lily,
ReplyDeleteI am Hasti from Hay Park School. I think that your handwriting is splended and way better than mine. I was also wondering if you could tell me a bit about what you are writing?
Kind regards from Hasti
Hi Hasti, thanks for the comment and also my hand writing is about how God made the earth
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