Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 26 May 2021
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Lily, my name is Lottie and I am in your classroom NBC.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your blog post, because of your use of colour title font, and blob characters. I’m currently writing an onomatopoeia, and hyperbole blog post as well, I feel like I should've used half a page for each like you did. Maybe you could have made your blog post title capitals, and maybe made the writing bigger.
What other types of Blog Post’s have you made?
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ReplyDeleteHi Lily, my name is Elliott and I’m a student from N.B.C.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your blog post on Onomatopoeia and Hyperbole.My favourite part was the example from the movie Despicable Me. You taught me alot about Onomatopoeia and Hyperbole. Next time maybe you could add some words to explain the subject better?
What app did you use to make your DLO?
See ya, Elliott.
nice job friend
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