Friday 26 June 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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ReplyDeleteam a yr 6 student at Hay Park School in Tuffery Class. I enjoyed reading your story about your Family, History war. I remember reading something like this before. Maybe next time you should make it a bit colorful and add some pictures to match it.
ReplyDeleteYour sincerely,
Marwah;D
Hi Marwah, Thank you so much for the comment and especially the tip!
DeleteHi Lily,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Miraj in Tufery Class from Hay park school. I really liked your blog post but I am really surprised that your Great Grandpa fought in WW2. Though I'm really happy that he survived it, but I do have one suggestion for your blog posts. That suggestion is to maybe add a video on your blog post I know I don't have many but I think that your blog will thrive if you add a video.
-Miraj
A video is a wonderful idea thanks for that I will defenitly do that in the future
DeleteKia Ora Lily,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading through your writing about your family history,war. I´m so surprised that your great grandpa went to WW2 but survived when he got shot on the head and arm. although I´m sorry for your great grandpa who died from natural causes.Next time you could add an video and photo.
-Tino
Hi Tino, thanks for looking at my blog post and leaving a comment, and thanks for the idea
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