Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 2 July 2020
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Hi lily i love your slide about huia.
ReplyDeletei like the awsome facts about the huia on the first slide.
maby next time you colud not add so meany picturs and focus more on the facts side of the storie.
is the huia your favrouit animal?
Meg
Hi Lily, your slideshow is awesome. Next time I think you should add more facts instead of a whole lot of pictures and I also think that you don't need to state the same fact more than once. What is your favourite animal is it the huia? Overall it's a great slideshow.
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