Renegade was a brave, young girl, she wasn't scared of much except for one thing…
sticking her toes out of the blankets at night!
sticking her toes out of the blankets at night!
She would NEVER stick them out, but it would be irritating because it was summer and it was very hot.
To keep her body cool she needed to make her feet cool.
To keep her body cool she needed to make her feet cool.
But one night… she slipped her toes out of the blanket but was sleeping so she didn't notice that they
were out.
were out.
She felt a little tickle on her toes so she moved her legs around and kicked a…
well she didn't know what she kicked!
well she didn't know what she kicked!
SWOOP!! A big swoop came at her feet and dragged her under the bed, she thought that this was the
end, but then… some cuddly cactus´s came near her.
end, but then… some cuddly cactus´s came near her.
They were moving and alive, these weren't spiky cactus´s though, they were soft.
She moved closer to one and put a smelly sticker on his head, as he breathed it in he turned greener
and looked stronger and was more energetic!
and looked stronger and was more energetic!
She gave one to all of them so all of them were stronger.
It must have been the smell so she picked up a small one and took it to smiggle, the cactus loved it,
it was like cactus heaven.
it was like cactus heaven.
So here's something to do, check for smiggle loving cactus´s under your bed.
Hi Lily!
ReplyDeleteI am enjoying catching up on all the Blog posts from Room 2. I love hearing what you have been up to.
I enjoyed reading your Imaginative piece of writing. I really liked the use of the language and the ending.
Next time could you check on how to upload it so that it is contained in the page? Im not sure how to do it myself so perhaps you could tell me when you find out :-)
Take care Lily
Mrs Stewart
Hi Lily,.
ReplyDeleteI found your blog post interesting and funny. Maybe next time you could copy and paste the words so they don't go off the page.
- Elliott
Well done Lily. A very imaginative story. I think that it really gripped the reader and left them wanting more. Well done for adding and image as well. Ka pai.
ReplyDeleteHi Lily what an interesting imaginative story. I'll have to make sure I get some smelly stickers in case some cactus come to my house because I like putting my feet out the bed when it is hot. Do you know if they have a favourite smell?
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