Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 9 May 2019
Holy spirit
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Lily, you have captured the Holy Spirit in an honest and true way. It is clear that you understand the Holy Spirit as a comforter. What is the Spirit of Truth? Make sure that you explain that. Great job Lily!
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Saffy and I am from St Francis of Assisi School This is amazing because you´re scratch is cool but long and not many people do that.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like scratch to because it is fun and you learn new things .
Next time, you could make the slide sorter.
Why did you add a scratch slideshow ?
My name is Lily and I go to St Francis Assisi This is amazing because it look like you put a lot of effort in the jazzy dance.
ReplyDeleteDid you know this reminded me of when I do jazz
Next time, you could make the slideshow shorter because it was really long.
Why did you chose to do a jazzy dance?
Kia Ora, my name is Helen and I'm from Room 23 at Owaiaraka District School. I really liked your blog post about the Holy Spirit. I really liked the way you put how caring the Holy Spirit is . Thank you for sharing your learning.
ReplyDeleteYou should check out my blog.
Blog you later,
by Helen.