Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 17 May 2019
In room 2 we have been learning to persuade people; so we made an advertisement of the latest chrome books.(Its not real!)
This is the one I made. We tried to make them as creative as we could that is why I said every famous person in the world thinks this is the best product on earth.
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Hello Lily, I am a student from Marshland school,I liked how you added deals so that more people get them(and who doesn't want a free chocolate bar)it reminded me of the time I got my devies,Next time you could make the font color easy to read.
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